I wouldn’t mind getting some collective opinions on this page, so I can correct it if necessary for the eventual print edition. I wanted to make this final scene a full page shot, but now that it’s done I’m concerned some of the key details are too obscure (I leave all corrections for the print edition, and I’m sure it’ll make a fun game for somebody to go through the books and spot what I changed). Can you parse what is going on, or are you left shrugging your shoulders?
Also, if last week’s comments are anything to go by, I think it prudent to apologize in case I’ve just caused someone’s head to explode. I promise, no more REEPS after this week!