I’m puzzled by the framing in the last panel. It seems to put the focus of attention on the foreground left corner, but… there’s a couch. (As I scrolled down, I thought the cat would be sitting there somehow…)
I’m no critique, but the computer or comm device that appears in panels number 2, 3 and 4 (but not in panel 1) is supposed to be some kind of holographic projection? If that’s the answer, have you made it as a computer graphics insert into the panels or is just a trick done with the shading in photoshop? Anyway, my concern is that it does not function as a representation of an hologram, and to me it is a little “out of style” (and very distracting). Sorry about this, but wanted to give you my opinion just in case… :0P
It’s a projection, much like the globe on the bridge. It’s not meant to be see-through, though. Over the years I’ve tried a few different ways of drawing it… I’ll find one that works eventually.
Good point! Fusella and her crew were able to get the Galaxion in better shape over the years she was in command, but I also think Fu had a bit of a blind spot to some of the remaining lingering issues. She loves her ship!
I, for one, really enjoyed this slower pacing of the story. Many webcomics fall into the trap of speeding things up for the weekly update cycle, and then – when you buy them as a book, or archive-binge – you realise how choppy and abrupt the story has become. Galaxion suffers none of that, and should be lauded.
Rusty? Naw… it just needs a little oil! ::passes Tara an oil can::
At last ! ! !
Yessss !
Wooohooooo !
That last panel needs Adam West’s Batman music – “To the Batpoles!”
I’m puzzled by the framing in the last panel. It seems to put the focus of attention on the foreground left corner, but… there’s a couch. (As I scrolled down, I thought the cat would be sitting there somehow…)
What? A cat in the captain’s office? That’s just crazy talk.
I’m no critique, but the computer or comm device that appears in panels number 2, 3 and 4 (but not in panel 1) is supposed to be some kind of holographic projection? If that’s the answer, have you made it as a computer graphics insert into the panels or is just a trick done with the shading in photoshop? Anyway, my concern is that it does not function as a representation of an hologram, and to me it is a little “out of style” (and very distracting). Sorry about this, but wanted to give you my opinion just in case… :0P
It’s a projection, much like the globe on the bridge. It’s not meant to be see-through, though. Over the years I’ve tried a few different ways of drawing it… I’ll find one that works eventually.
Wait, there’s a plot? When did that happen?
That’s what I’ve been saying all along.
Oh, I love the sound of plot in the morning, erm, evening!
plot ! plot ! plot !
Well, it’s about God D*** time! All this background info was nice, but STORY!
At last!
(lol)
Thanks.
Hmmm… I wonder what those nefarious ‘rake people’ have been up to???
What I want to know is if they have those 100 mile-an-hour leaf-blowers !
All those gardeners do ! !
Far better off? Wasn’t the ship pretty much falling apart? O_o
Good point! Fusella and her crew were able to get the Galaxion in better shape over the years she was in command, but I also think Fu had a bit of a blind spot to some of the remaining lingering issues. She loves her ship!
I, for one, really enjoyed this slower pacing of the story. Many webcomics fall into the trap of speeding things up for the weekly update cycle, and then – when you buy them as a book, or archive-binge – you realise how choppy and abrupt the story has become. Galaxion suffers none of that, and should be lauded.