The fact that the (Dean?) confirms Zan’s admission into the academy in the second to last frame was a wee bit too subtle for me until I saw the next page.
Jeff, I’m not sure if that means you think the transition worked OK or not! This story originally appeared in print, and I suppose the flow is a lot different reading online than on paper. Hm, maybe not so much, though… as I recall, this was a “page turn” moment!
The fact that the (Dean?) confirms Zan’s admission into the academy in the second to last frame was a wee bit too subtle for me until I saw the next page.
Jeff, I’m not sure if that means you think the transition worked OK or not! This story originally appeared in print, and I suppose the flow is a lot different reading online than on paper. Hm, maybe not so much, though… as I recall, this was a “page turn” moment!