On this page I decided to try a post-production tweak of just the tall “s” letters in the Miesti dialogue, to determine if that small fix alone with solve the legibility problems. What do you think? Is this enough, or should I also consider straightening out the “balloons” a bit more?

Also, if you’re wondering why “like a mosquito” rings a bell, you may want to flip back to this page from Chapter Four.

We also have a new blog post today, which is a re-posting of an article which originally ran a couple of weeks ago on the “webcomics tutorials and advice” site, Webcomics.com. I’m sharing it here on my own site not so much because I think you’re all keen on picking up some traditional drawing tips, but because I thought you might appreciate the sneak peek at an upcoming page. ;-)