Okay, everybody, cliffnotes time. Because most of you will be reading this at the page/week rate, I expect this part might seem a bit confusing. So I’ll spell it out for you: this section of the story is a flashback. If you go back and look at the previous couple of pages and read them in a row, hopefully the visual cues will kick in and then it’ll start to make sense. If not… well, that’s why we have these cliffnotes!
A small text box saying, X “hours earlier” might be in order.
I was wondering why they were attempting to jump out of space dock. Until I read your cliff notes…
You have a nice clean style to your work…I will keep reading
Robert
I’d hoped that the flashback would be clear without the use of a narrative box…. oh well. I’ll have to chalk this one up to a learning experience and try to make the transition clearer next time I try something like this. Thanks for the input, Robert!
Six years later, I chime in with a timely “It *was* perfectly clear that it was the commencement of a flashback, so don’t fret.”