Comments on: p.274 (Chapter Nine)

By: littlebeast

littlebeast — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 04:58:02 +0000

Er… “I’m really hoping it not this lamp pole is a bit”… should that be “hoping it’s not”, or what?

By: APStorm

APStorm — Tue, 28 Aug 2012 13:35:23 +0000

Not too much with Aria, I think, though… I figure it’s just the disorienting feeling of hearing/experiencing other people’s thoughts that’s got them both off-balance.

By: Jeremy

Jeremy — Tue, 21 Aug 2012 15:48:02 +0000

I love this. The two pacifists who were all starry-eyed about First Contact have just been infected by something that proves that First Contact can be invasive and dangerous, and thus should be prepared for more pragmatically.

Carefree people like that have no business in such missions.

By: Rockphed

Rockphed — Tue, 21 Aug 2012 05:30:27 +0000

I like how he thinks the General is going to leave him behind.

By: Oarboar

Oarboar — Tue, 14 Aug 2012 17:32:25 +0000

I think Zan’s a bit zonked from the trenat, as it’s adversely affected Aria. That stuff’s got a kick, apparently.

By: Owen Smith

Owen Smith — Tue, 14 Aug 2012 16:43:41 +0000

How did someone so clumsy get a place on a starship?

By: Andrew Crisp

Andrew Crisp — Tue, 14 Aug 2012 14:37:31 +0000

Whoa, Zan, I thought I told you to take it easy with the trenat. That stuff’s got quite the kick, you know. Some people start hearing voices after just one glass and talk about hangovers…

By: Cassie S.

Cassie S. — Tue, 14 Aug 2012 14:00:16 +0000

Ah…I was wondering where Zan was! He wasn’t in any of the panels at the end of the chapter, so I figured they might have gotten him, too. Yay for (guessing?) correctly!

By: Niall

Niall — Tue, 14 Aug 2012 12:19:45 +0000

I guess it makes sense to keep that part of the old storyline. I call flashback in ten pages.

By: Insectoid

Insectoid — Tue, 14 Aug 2012 09:40:27 +0000

What was it Jules Rivera called him? *goes and looks* MacGyver. Right. Exactly. XD