Comments on: p.263 (Chapter Nine)

By: Sarah

Sarah — Tue, 03 Jul 2012 23:49:41 +0000

I just looked after you pointed it out and yeah, I can see it too. Barely, but it defently looks like its there

By: Fred

Fred — Mon, 11 Jun 2012 11:19:25 +0000

Are we seeing signs that there are no bad guys and that everyone is a victim? The Miesti are stuck on this planet with no way to escape. The Rautani are the Miesti’s slaves. The Orehu are stuck in their underground lairs. The Hiawatha crew are stuck in an alternate universe.

By: Stewart

Stewart — Thu, 07 Jun 2012 15:21:10 +0000

Ditto. Although changing the ls to look slightly less like the ss might not hurt.

By: Nickpheas

Nickpheas — Wed, 06 Jun 2012 13:50:53 +0000

Reads fine to me. Well, the main converstion anyway. If we’re supposed to be able to make sense of the threads of background conversation then I can’t, but I’d assumed that was just showing that there were many conversational lines going on at once, some just whispers and echoes.

By: cookie

cookie — Tue, 05 Jun 2012 23:44:58 +0000

Ambivalent – Now that you translated it, I’m reading the same thing. I suppose the Local Guy is worried about Lt. Tremaine, his obvious friend who got brainzapped by Yssala. I’m also looking at his body language where he is patting Tremaine’s former chair protectively. Local Guy has no reason to care about Aria.

By: AmbiValent

AmbiValent — Tue, 05 Jun 2012 22:03:54 +0000

I seem to read “I sure hope she’s okay” on the lower left side… is that really written there or are the Miesti taking me over?

By: Dranorter

Dranorter — Tue, 05 Jun 2012 19:59:42 +0000

I also agree! I hope the change is somewhat minimal.

By: Jules Rivera

Jules Rivera — Tue, 05 Jun 2012 18:59:46 +0000

I would have so much fun coloring this page if I could. Pretty butterfly-things, psychotropic communication, and floaty hair. Seriously fun stuff here.

By: Deb

Deb — Tue, 05 Jun 2012 18:10:18 +0000

I agree

By: corvideye

corvideye — Tue, 05 Jun 2012 16:38:14 +0000

It’s funny, it seems perfectly readable to me, but maybe that’s because I look at old books a lot!