Comments on: p.241 (Chapter Eight)

By: Stone Rhino

Stone Rhino — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 05:20:52 +0000

Dangit! Just when the we get to a great spot, it shifts to the comic relief. But I think we should be more concerned about the one with the broken arm.

By: Niall

Niall — Sat, 07 Jan 2012 15:54:29 +0000

Having re-read all the floppies now… wow. This version has so much more of a sense of danger and trouble. And knowing the very vague generalities of what’s coming next… eep. Though I suspect things will happen somewhat differently too.

I can say, though, that the slower pace is so much better. Comparing, the floppies had things happen rather quickly, plot points being hit at the expense of characters somewhat (which is why I was always a bit lost). This is much more of a nail-biter.

By: Niall

Niall — Thu, 05 Jan 2012 18:40:13 +0000

When I wrote that comment, I hadn’t realised you had re-restarted the storyline… and I really like this one, it’s much clearer and the extra bits of character development cement them in my head much more solidly. I always had a little bit of trouble in the floppies remembering who was who, how did things happen… no such problem here. And the art is more solid – literally, those thicker lines have done wonders to the perspective and the character designs.

By: HardWearJunkie

HardWearJunkie — Thu, 05 Jan 2012 07:51:00 +0000

Kiss him already!

By: Tara

Tara — Thu, 05 Jan 2012 04:01:21 +0000

Niall, that has to be the coolest thing I’ve heard all week. Thank you!

By: Tara

Tara — Thu, 05 Jan 2012 04:00:11 +0000

Excellent news! I’m so glad you found us. I hope you enjoy the new version of the story!

By: Elihias

Elihias — Wed, 04 Jan 2012 19:40:15 +0000

Ah… the new iDuct III …. I didn’t realize they
were in general service yet.

Eli.

By: Niall

Niall — Wed, 04 Jan 2012 17:34:53 +0000

…Tara, I had very odd/partly sick dreams last night after being inordinately tired all day and reading the first 4 chapters in a go. Normally my dreams are all kinda actiony (in a bad way) and full of suspense that leaves me drained.. but these were filled with myriad moments of discussion, pauses, interactions. In other words, Galaxion influenced my dreams, and very few things manage to do that.

By: Jamming

Jamming — Wed, 04 Jan 2012 10:54:50 +0000

Needs more duct tape, so the pieces don’t fall off.

By: Lizzy

Lizzy — Tue, 03 Jan 2012 22:39:27 +0000

You said it! I want to know the result of Nelson’s perfectly justified hysterics. But techies being techies is also fun.