Comments on: p. 157 (Chapter 5)

By: morganchampion

morganchampion — Tue, 08 Jun 2010 09:30:14 +0000

Sounds like their captors have enemies…

Prestwick — Mon, 07 Jun 2010 23:21:04 +0000

“Danger? But Jax Augustus said…”

Cliffhanger time, can’t wait to see what happens next!

Torjin — Sat, 05 Jun 2010 18:26:40 +0000

now, this is getting more mysterious every page – and i *had* hoped for a bit resolution… on the other hand it just got more interesting

and: great new layout!

Simon — Fri, 04 Jun 2010 14:22:31 +0000

Aw, man! It’s like every page is a cliffhanger.

Very painful. (Keep it up!)

Tara — Fri, 04 Jun 2010 13:56:59 +0000

Whoops– thanks for the catch, John! Now fixed.

John — Fri, 04 Jun 2010 12:53:51 +0000

You skipped page 157… excellent plot twists though!

Jeremy — Fri, 04 Jun 2010 11:06:20 +0000

All of this for so little? How disapppointing. I hope that doesn’t mean that EVERYONE ELSE on the ship died. Its a bit cliché, no?

Insectoid — Fri, 04 Jun 2010 08:38:29 +0000

Stay down there… I can hear Fusella tump-tump-tumping from here!

Yes, very tempted.