Comments on: p. 148 (Chapter 5)

By: R.G.

R.G. — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 04:46:19 +0000

Well,this monday is Aria’s birthday,right?

Well,then,allow me to be the first to say:

MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY!

By: Quieteyes

Quieteyes — Wed, 14 Apr 2010 13:39:05 +0000

@Tara: No change in wording needed. I was able to figure out what he ment when he said that (although, admittedly, I was thinking about ship scanners, not hand scanners).

By: Matthew Goldstein

Matthew Goldstein — Wed, 14 Apr 2010 04:44:20 +0000

I’ve actually found a reasonably strong overlap between (young) contra dancers and comic fans, though maybe that’s just around here. Let us know if you’ll be dancing at the Concord Scout House!

By: R.G.

R.G. — Wed, 14 Apr 2010 02:20:13 +0000

My mistake.

It’s next Monday .

Sorry about that.

By: R.G.

R.G. — Wed, 14 Apr 2010 02:14:12 +0000

Is it true that this Sunday is Aria’s birthday?

As a gift,I’d like to recommend T.S. Eliot’s poem “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” to read to her literary cat.

(I would have also liked to recommend to the song “Man!I feel like a woman” by Shania Twain,but I don’t if she would like it or not.)

In any case,give her all my best wishes!

By: Tara

Tara — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 16:09:52 +0000

@Nate: That’s a good deduction!

@Simon: Sorry, Zan’s being a bit vague there. What he’s actually referring to is the fact that he now understands how the, um, mysterious people were able to sneak up on the team. The thick rock walls of the cave blocked their sensors. I’ll have to think about whether I want to re-word that bit. As for what else he may be seeing… well, that will have to wait!

By: Simon

Simon — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 14:46:25 +0000

Argh! Cliffhanger! Now I see what?!?!

By: Nate

Nate — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 09:27:50 +0000

Hmm. They have hand weapons, but seem to be in stealth mode with a hideout, which suggests that they’re in the minority and are some kind of underground/resistance.

By: Insectoid

Insectoid — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 08:28:59 +0000

Oops… there should be a word between ‘the’ and ‘are’… Shame on me for misusing angle brackets. What I meant to say was “when we find out who the (insert non-spoiling name of captors) are”.

By: Insectoid

Insectoid — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 08:25:21 +0000

Glad you had a good weekend, Tara!

I’m going to do my very best not to spoil anything happening in the story now, as I already know too much. However, I might have a few things to say when we find out who the are.